The imagery in this story is priceless. I could see and feel everything. I walked up inside coulibistrie and then back down to the sea side to look for boney.
The sounds, colours and expressions of the characters stand out magnificent.
You have really refined your craft.
I can't wait to see where this story goes. Part 2 pls
I think the most impactful stories are those that bring you into their world and that's what I wanted to do with Origins. Truly glad that you enjoyed it.
Such a great read. So many beautiful details!
Ikr! I had so much fun writing this one. The editor really helped bring it to life.
Thank you so much for reading. 🫶🏾
The imagery in this story is priceless. I could see and feel everything. I walked up inside coulibistrie and then back down to the sea side to look for boney.
The sounds, colours and expressions of the characters stand out magnificent.
You have really refined your craft.
I can't wait to see where this story goes. Part 2 pls
Aww..It gladdens my heart to hear that. :)
I think the most impactful stories are those that bring you into their world and that's what I wanted to do with Origins. Truly glad that you enjoyed it.
Stay tuned for Part II.