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Brittany Kwentua's avatar

Such a great read. So many beautiful details!

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stilliwrite.me@gmail.com's avatar

The imagery in this story is priceless. I could see and feel everything. I walked up inside coulibistrie and then back down to the sea side to look for boney.

The sounds, colours and expressions of the characters stand out magnificent.

You have really refined your craft.

I can't wait to see where this story goes. Part 2 pls

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